Modified – Nice conversion story, I’m sure she needed it
Modified Behavior – Nice human to pet story, well done and enjoyable
Mona’s Makeover (Paladin) – A nice slow transformation from frumpy to sexy not a ton of actual sex
Money Shot – Well written, but I’m never a fan of the ones that make a strong point of destroying a relationship.
MOO! – An amusing cow transformation with a good dose of humiliation.
Mood Enhancement – Just a nice safe little experiment here, nothing more. 🙂
Mood Musak – Yet another important lesson for the young MCer, make sure you ONLY get your intended target(s)
A More Permanent Position – a decent humiliation/revenge story, would be nice if there were more struggle on the victims part.
Morgana’s Day Spa – An enjoyable story with an amusing twist at the end. The Epilogue is entirely unnecessary but fun.
Morgana’s Gift – Not much MC but an enjoyable story
Morning Heat – A fun little dog transformation hypnosis scenario
Morningview Psychiatric Hospital – Beneficial MC to help the unbalanced, not a bad story but could probably use 1 more chapter.
Mother’s Motor’s Running Hot – I like the prank call aspect.
Mountin’ Biking – Pretty good, needed to be a little longer before the good guys won.
Mr Carruthers’ Garden – A very special garden indeed.
Mr. Bankole – Interesting premise, I kinda like the story
Mr. Dick Head – Ok, I shouldn’t have, but I liked this one.
Mr. Poe – Beware of MCers with gifts, they may be more fucked up than you.
Mrs. Arrogant Tamed & Mrs. Arrogant Tamed 2 – Some stories should just be combined into a single entity. Still, these are both quite hot stories about a bitch and her sister that get thoroughly tamed.
Music of the Night – Loved all the Beatles references and the content. A shame he never did the sequels he mentioned.
My best friend – Nice hot story, but way too short.
My Boyfriend Is Such a Liar – Be careful about bets made with hypnotists and mind controllers.
My Bratty Brother – Not bad, kinda middle of the road, some decent humiliation.
My Brief Career – Very fun little story about a Mind Controller who gets in out of his depth.
My Car, My Rules – Temptation can be evil, in this case VERY evil(in a good way)
My Career as a Wizard – Not bad, but a bit… mechanical…not sure if that’s the word but there’s no emotion, just action.
My Descent Into Lesbian Tit Slavery – A very nice lactation enslavement that’s pretty hot.
My Favorite Virus – Nicely written, definitely a scenario where things get out of control but in a good way. Could probably use another chapter or two but I don’t see that happening.
My Four Aces – A little love, a little sex, a little MC, a little revenge. Works for me!
My Imaginary Friend – Ok, I have to admit, I really like his imaginary friend, and both parts were very fun.
My Late Uncle’s Gadgets – Very hot, the machine in this is definitely something I’d want to use on a few people I know.
My Mind Is Gone – Jukebox really is very good at this, VERY enjoyable.
My New Boyfriend – Not sure why but I enjoyed this story, may have just been my mood as the MC was obvious and simple.
My New Career – This sequel to My Brief Career and is wonderfully fun and a good laugh, sadly, there’s not really any good sex but very well done D. Holzer I look forward to reading more of your work.
My New Girlfriend (Ice Bear) – An interesting story, where the guy has no idea why the girl is SO dedicated to him.
My Real Estate Career – Sequel to My New Career and My Brief Career, another fun story.
My Sister’s Captive – Definitely working on twisted, needs more parts but was started last year so who knows.
My Wife, the Professor – A very nice story(and an excellent gift) Sadly, unfinished.
My Wife’s Surprise – More husbands need surprises like this 🙂
My Wife’s Therapist – Not bad, hate to say it but the husband’s kind of a dick and no revenge against the Therapist happens